peer assessment

• he's said that all the adverts have shoes that are strong
• he has shown that they all show some thing different
• he has shown that they can be used for sports or just going out

neither the wrighter has not said much about them, what there good for or what is target audience

can't tell what the visual elements is because he has not given much info about his own opinaion about the three shoe adverts

picture of mind maps

these shoes are very similar but they all are very strong and the first shoes is about graffiti the second shoe is about war and the final shoe is in a shape of a heart which is saying those shoes are made for running etc